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Thursday 24 October 2013

My Narrative Writing


Once upon a time there was a farmer named Max. One day he went to his older brothers birthday and he was a farmer and his name was Ben. He was the oldest brother.


While he was driving, a person on by the road put out his thumb and waved. Then max gave him a ride, the guy suddenly was trying to get Max out of the tuck. Later a sheep was on the road, then he turned left then went to the pond. Max got out of the car flew out, and went into a hay bale then he passed out.

Suddenly Max had a problem, he woke up and got stuck. Later on he heard a birthday song and he thought he knew that he was there because he heard his brothers name. But that was still a problem that he was stuck. Then he had to yell he said “HAY BEN BEN!” Someone heard Max’s voice and that was his second older brother.


Later he got out of the hay and said “Happy Birthday” to his brother. Then he had a good time there. Later on he had to go home, he had to walk two miles from his brother’s home.


THE END…

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